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Finally! Justjournal seems to be in working shape again! Anyways... About where the story is going (I'm not giving too much away so don't worry)... I like putting a lot of 'mini-plots' into fics that cut out a bigger picture, so yes there will be more drama before the 'great climax'. No worries though, since I have a habit of making endings somewhat bittersweet (at least that's what I strive to do), Salvation's ending will surely satisfy everyone.
I do like angst, but I won't exagerate it. I'll try to keep it moderately realistic with Tatsuki's pregnancy and her insecurities and Ichigo's anger over Uryuu's and Yuzu's relationship. That's a 'mini-plot' that falls sort of like a puzzle-piece into the whole plot. Believe it or not, I sometimes DO get depressed when re-reading some of my fics. LOL So I'll try my hardest to not be so depressing by adding a smidge of hope for the characters.
Because how can anyone go on without any rays of hope, right?! =)
According to a chat buddy of mine the national consent age in Japan is 13. (SHOCKING!) But districts can change the age, so ages may vary between 13 to 18 years of age depending on location. In Salvation, I'm saying that Karakura's age of consent is 16, so if people find Uryuu's and Yuzu's relationship disgusting, well... It's legal, according to me who is writing this story.
On the subject of this chapter... Consensual sex with mutual attraction and AGE LAWS APPLYING is very different from some sick shitface raping a kid! Low-age consent laws only apply to natively-born citizens of said country.-- Def>: traveling American pedophiles are as fucked there as they are here.--
No child wants a disgusting slobbering old fart all over them. All child-rapists should be bleeped, publically butt-bleeped with rusty tire-irons and left to be eaten by a swarm of hungry buzzards, inbred cannibal-hillbillies & rabid beavers! (I thought adding in a bunch of mutant butt-loving hornets, angry lab monkeys and giant rapacious martians would be laying it on a little too thick)
Unfortunately laws are too sickeningly humane when it comes to such filth which is why these sick fucks still commit such crimes against children because all they get is a couple of years in jail, instead of a well-deserved castration.
　
Review Replies:
gollumsfriend- LOL. Yeah, I kinda gave off some hints on their first lemon so people wouldn't think the pregnancy came out of the blue. Tatsuki won't tell Ichigo right away. At least I don't plan her too because the pregnancy is actually a minor milestone in their relationship. And thanks, it's good to be back working on this fic!
BattleCry- Yeah. Their relationship bond is a lot closer that they imagined. A baby kinda makes it more profound for them. I LOVE this pairing! It has so much good drama potential! Ichigo and Tatsuki will have a talk eventually. Well everyone involved in the story will need to have a talk because in a way, they're all going to get personally involved in a long chain of events. I think all of the characters, not just Ichigo and Tatsuki need to grow up and learn how to put aside their differences in order to have a better comraderie/friendship. I'm sure you're going to like it! And again sorry for taking so long in updating! I feel like a douchebag for it! I WILL finish this fic. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we really need more Ichi/Tat fics in this fandom (most of all finished ones). =)
toujourseveille- Thanks a lot. I try to give stories a good pace because rushed fics make me kinda lose track of events. *blushes* Glad you're enjoying the fic!
johnny redgrave- thanks! I hope I won't go through another writer's block again, though I've been sooo busy lately.
Posted BEFORE actual upload to see if crappy justjournal.com is working right.
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